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The moonlight filtered through the trees to my right as I walked along the well-worn path. I loved walking here at night. This park was more natural than some of the over-cultivated parks closer to my home, and I preferred it to them. It was quieter her too. Leaves crunched under my feet and a cool breeze lifted my hair gently. I shivered, but it wasn’t because I was cold. I just had an odd feeling settle in the pit of my stomach, like something wasn’t quite right in the air around me.
That’s when I heard the laughter. It was carried on the breeze and just barely tickled my ear with its gleeful sound. It sounded like children were playing on a distant playground, but I knew it was too late for children to be out. My steps faltered. I suddenly wondered if it was safe to be out alone tonight.
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word count: 300 words
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The contest is open from now (midnight EST on 2/7/12) to midnight EST on 2/20/12.
To win, write a piece of flash fiction (300 words or less) on your (fictional or not) first-person encounter with a faery, goblin, or fantastical being of your choice. Post your entry on your blog and paste the link code into the HTML editor to be included.
1st Place: A copy of The Fairy Ring and a 10 page edit by Anna Meade.
2nd Place: A copy of The Fairy Ring and a 5 page edit by Anna Meade.
3rd Place: A copy of The Fairy Ring.
So let your imagination run wild. It can be whimsical, beautiful, emotional, creepy, mysterious or horrifying. I ask that you restrict your undead submissions to another contest (no zombies or vampires, please).
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17 comments:
You made ME want to dance!
You did a great job with 300 words. For a moment, I felt like I was in a magical place of freedom and peace doing a sensual fairy dance. Thank you for taking me to that world.
Really enjoyed the scene you set. Nice Rebecca!
Thanks, Donna, alayne and Jo-Anne! :)
Beautiful, so discriptive, off to read more.
I actually read your longer draft first. I think this one might be stronger!
Really amazing what you did with 300 words...very nice! Good luck.
Love a good fairy dance! Thank you for entering, Rebecca :)
Very evocative--and thanks for the shout-out! This is definitely a competitive field of flash fics. :)
That's lovely, well done :)
Lovely tale. I would love to see a fairy dance circle. :)
I liked how you put me right in the story, with the specific details such as the crunching leaves.
And I really enjoyed the ending! That reverie, and that dream-like quality, definitely added to the story's ethereal mystique.
Enjoyed it! Very well done.
Such loving detail to imagery! Lovely piece!
Thanks, patientdreamer,Amalia, Penny, Anna, Tonya, SJIHoliday,J. Whitworth Hazzard, L. S. Taylor, ashviper and Dee!
Good story, I particularly like the imagery of fairy lights in moonlight.
I love this! I can feel the fairies all around. Well done!
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